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Thursday, April 16, 2020

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So juiring this lock down this was a wrighting
for school

3 comments:

  1. Hi Taylor,
    This is a really cool piece of writing. I am impressed that your spelling and punctuation is perfect. Well done! Did you spend time proof reading it or did it just happen?
    Is this a true story or made up?

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  2. Hi Taylor, Its Honey here that was a amazing story! Is it made up or true? if it is true Your grandma must be very brave. I love the fact that all the spelling is perfect and the story you chose was great. Also the story was very intriguing and fun. Hope you are having a good time at home in your house.
    Honey :)

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  3. Hi Taylor,
    Well done on this piece of writing. I am loving seeing how excited you are about all of this new learning. Keep up that great proof reading as it makes your writing a pleasure to read.

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