Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Taylor,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really cool piece of writing. I am impressed that your spelling and punctuation is perfect. Well done! Did you spend time proof reading it or did it just happen?
Is this a true story or made up?
Hi Taylor, Its Honey here that was a amazing story! Is it made up or true? if it is true Your grandma must be very brave. I love the fact that all the spelling is perfect and the story you chose was great. Also the story was very intriguing and fun. Hope you are having a good time at home in your house.
ReplyDeleteHoney :)
Hi Taylor,
ReplyDeleteWell done on this piece of writing. I am loving seeing how excited you are about all of this new learning. Keep up that great proof reading as it makes your writing a pleasure to read.