Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, April 22, 2020
richnes
This was the second week in lockdown wrighting activaty it is a story about a billionar boy what would yo buy if you were a Googleplexillionar what would buy out of ten on how hard it was it would be a 5
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Hi Taylor
ReplyDeleteI really like the ideas you have in your billionaire boy story. Remember to read your sentences back to you to see if they make sense. Capital letters and full stops are a good start. Ask someone at home to help if you need it. Great effort, keep it up!