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Wednesday, April 22, 2020

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Once there was a kid named Joe spude he was no ordinary boy he was only twelve but he already googolplexilean dollars our story begins with him racing around his full sized race track most rich kids have mini versions but joe was a big kid and needed a bigger than most kids so he got a real race car . When all of a sudden he swerved off course and then CRASH he slammed to a tree so Joe went to his dad who was sitting on a huge black couch made of the rarest fur ever it was Joe’s 12th Birthday so his dad handed him a check for 2 million dollars he was a spoilt kid but he just wanted to live a normal life so he changed from his posh school to the local comp as soon as he got there he made a friend called Bob,Bob was a little fatter than Joe . nowone knew he was rich until he forgot his homework so he got his dad to get it and bring it but his dad bought it in a helicopter so Bob was annoyed with Joe but he did not mind it. So that night he went home to see a random lady with his dad. She was 19 so Joe ran away to a sweet shop where he saw Bob and they made up . Joe worried about his dad so he went home but it was not there but his dad was so Joe ran over to him and gave him a hug so his dad told him what happened “people are suing me for lots and lots of money so they were poor so they went to see Bob and then Joe's Dad really likes Bobs mum and the other way round and now they live with each other THE END

 This was the second week in lockdown wrighting activaty it is a story about a billionar boy what would yo buy if you were a Googleplexillionar what would buy out of ten on how hard it was it would be a 5

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  1. Hi Taylor
    I really like the ideas you have in your billionaire boy story. Remember to read your sentences back to you to see if they make sense. Capital letters and full stops are a good start. Ask someone at home to help if you need it. Great effort, keep it up!

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